Friday, April 4, 2008

The first poem which i wrote

A few days back, i was reading a post on my friends blog which really forced me to write a poem. So i decided that i am going to write it and put it up on my blog because i share each experience of my life here. The name of the poem is:

HOPE!!!
On the path of infinity,
there is a hope.
On the journey of infinty,
there is a hope.
On the land of infinity,
there is a hope.
On the world of infinity,
there is a hope.
A hope which never dies,
but in the dark,it arise
like a burning light.
A hope full of high spirits,
but not fright.

I hope you like it:)

34 comments:

vishesh said...

lol...so you too have taken to infinity hu?
to quote myself

" the goal is infinite, the paths are infinite, the ways are infinite, the universe is infinite, all paths lead to infinity. "

Meghna said...

Hi Sahefa,
Thanks a lot dear! it's so sweet of you to link me and to publish this poem...I'm so glad I could encourage you to write this ...LOL!...And it's so very well written! Lovely...Awesome :)
BTW, I don;t think you know, so I thoguht I'd tell you. I also write poems and stories and other stuff which you can find on my second blog....
The link is:
htt://meghnaspages.blogspot.com/

Hope you enjoy it too...And keep writing poems cause you are great at it :D

Alok said...

Nice attempt!

Appreciate the thoughts behind it. Hope: one of the most powerful weapons.

Sahefa said...

Vishesh: Yup...but i guess you told me that before as well. Thank you.

Meghna: My pleasure. I will sure check it out.

@ Alok: Thank you.Yup i agree with you.

vishesh said...

ops...lol sorry for repeating :)

Tshhar Mangal said...

great..job done
congrats on writng such a wonderfull piece

Sahefa said...

@ Vishesh: No problem

@ Tshhar: Thank you

G U R U said...

I HOPE you have enough practice now to write your second poem! Good one!

brocasarea said...

hm.....good poem!!...:)..keep writing

SambY said...

wow snice poem sahefa..u have talent...:-)

Sahefa said...

@ Guru: I guess...I will sure try to write another one.

@ Brocasarea: Thank you

@ Samby: Really i do..thank you

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey good poem.....man u do good work.....
keep writing poems..

Sahefa said...

@ Nirmal: Thank you so much

Ananya said...

Heyy Sahefa
Very nice Poem.I don't have this talent.I m not able to write poems.

Hats Off to ur this poem.

Keep it up.

Sahefa said...

Thank you...what makes you think you don't have talent. I used to think this as well but when i gave it a try i found that i can write.
Same is the case with you. Just try...u will do it.

Ananya said...

Thnx Sahefa

Sahefa said...

@ AnanyaL No probzzz

Anvita said...

Thats a very lovely poem babes. Pretty good for your first attempt.

BTW, while we r at it, I would like to share a quote on hope by Allan Chalmers

'The Grand essentials of happiness are, something to do, something to love, and something to hope for.'

ayushi said...

nice one,sahefa...
Keep on writing, you have made a good start.
i liked the idea which underlay the sense of infinity, although,according to me, hope is something which we perceive and things will not seem infinite if we have it.

pj said...

nice poem....u r just 13 n write such poems...way to go!...
and yes hope everything...after all that's a reason to live! it is like an oasis in a desert....have to walk a lot to find it....but there surely is one...somewhere.....

Sahefa said...

@ Anvita: Thank you. I really liked the quote

@ Ayushi: Thank you...i agree with you but this was my first poem so i jotted down whatever i could think of:P

@ pj: Thank you and i agree with you

gunj said...

hey...nice poem thr!

Niyara - Asian Rocxs said...

that was nice! i think the first poem i ever wrote (properly) was one about bombings and war from world war two. your hope one is so much more bight!

tekybala said...

hey., nice thoughts. keep rocking...

Sahefa said...

@ Gunj: Thank you

@ Niyara: Thank you. Do send me your writings.

@ Tekybala: Thank you

AaYuShI said...

Hey Sahefa
Good one.
Thanks for visiting my blog.
Do comment on mine.

Toodles

^Cheers^

Sahefa said...

Thnx
sure

Friendly nextdoor guy said...

nifty work sahefa!!

keep blogging

durjoy datta said...

nice work sahefa!
sorry for my absence....
was a little tied up!!!
loved the post.....

Sahefa said...

@ friendly next door guy: Thnx a lot

@ Durjoy: No need to sorry. I am happy that you came and commented on my blog. Thank you.

suvaiba said...

hey sahefa
long tym na
well a very well rytteen poem which encircles all ur thoughtz
well even i ryt poemz ..hope u lyk minez..
infinity leadz toprosperity
well dun
keep rytin
an posstin lollz

Sahefa said...

@ Suvaiba: thnx

aritri said...
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aritri said...

nice poem...gr8 2 c u write @ such a small age...keep writin cos its one of d most pleasurable thing one can do...